第一篇:【英语】总结经典 对照复习拿高分
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【英语】总结经典范文 对照复习拿高分
健康类
(1)1997年真题。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Interpret the following pictures.2.Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.真题分析:
这是典型的图表+提纲式的命题,题目中提供的材料十分丰富,包括柱状图、饼状图以及其他相关数据。通过对组图的分析,我们可以看出烟草在全世界有着十分庞大的消费群体规模,每年因为烟草消费消耗的资金数额大得惊人,同时也有数以百万计的人由于烟草消费而被夺去了生命。当然,我们从图中也可以发现一个令人欣喜的趋势,那就是烟草的总产量在近几年呈下降的态势,一定程度上说明了烟草消费引起的健康问题开始得到了人们的重视,并出现了相关的解决措施。
本题的难点在于图表给的信息量太大,考生如何最恰当地在全文中使用数据将决定文章的质量。如果一味将所有数据都堆在第一段,会造成第一段过于冗长,全文头重脚轻。在下面的范文中,图表数字得到了灵活的运用,比较得体。比如文章在一开始先用烟民人数占全世界人数的比例来说明了烟草消费的巨大规模,然后又通过该行业消耗的人民财产和生命进一步说明产业之大、对人类危害之重。而至于第一幅图中关于烟草产量的数字则被用到了第二段中来说明未来的趋势,非常得体、恰当。
范文:
Tobacco is one of the commodities that are consumedin an immense amountworldwide.From the pictures, we can learn thatthe global smoking populationamounts to1.1 billion,approximately20% of all the worlds’ residents.200 billion dollars are spentannually in order topurchasetobacco and relevant products, which furtherstimulatethe business’flourishingdevelopment.Meanwhile,the harm caused by tobacco consumption is experiencing a similar upward trend—statistics indicates that3,000,000 people die of smoking and related diseases every year.Nevertheless, given the pessimistic statistics at the present, we can still predict optimistically thattobacco consumption willdeclinebased on several new tendencies that areemerging.In the first place, there is an extensive public awareness of the negative impact of smoking, and as a result, more people resist thetempetationof cigarettes.In the second place, governments are setting more
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regulations to limit tobacco production.The effectiveness of such a policy wastestifiedby the prompt drop of the tobacco production from 14.364 billion in 1994 pounds to 14.2 billion pounds in 1995 as seen in the picture.In short, I firmly believe that, with the efforts of the whole society, we canlaunchmore movements to realize a cleaner world with less smoking.道德类
(1)1998年真题。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Write out the message conveyed by the cartoon.2.Give your comments.真题分析:
本题是考研短文作文中采用漫画来作为试题的第一次尝试。图中一只母鸡在高唱产品承诺,但是我们看一看其承诺会不禁哑然失笑,因为所谓的“承诺”只不过的它的本分。漫画形象生动了反映了当今社会上一个普遍而又奇怪的现象,也就是商家故意混淆“吹嘘”和“分内事”之间的关系,从而误导消费者。
本题的难点在于考生需要从大量的文字信息中找到中心思想。这里的一大忌讳就是盲目翻译打油诗和母鸡的承诺,因为这不仅会占用很多字数,而且不伦不类的翻译还会降低文章的质量。这就进一步说明了在写作图画作文的时候,抓住中心思想、提炼观点才是关键。
范文:
The cartoon presentsa hen singing proudly about her promise of producing good-quality eggs.However, a quick glance ather wordsreveals ironically thattheso-called“promise”—round eggs composed of the three necessary parts of shell, white and yolk—is,as a matter of fact, what a hen is supposed to produce.The henmirrors a phenomenon that permeates our society, that is, businessesutilizethe basic features of their products and services as theselling pointsfor their advertisement campaigns.These “beautiful promises”tend toshape a false impression in the consumers’ mind that the products and services are of extraordinary characteristics.In this sense, the promise of one’s own responsibility is like a method of cheating, and is quite against professional morals, although there is no evidence of dishonesty if the words are examinedliterally.In my point of view, other than promising what one should do, the secret for business success is to have the consumers understand what extra advantages they would be provided with.Such an initiative can push businesses to conduct profound research, dedicate themselves to innovation, and concentrate on quality improvement and perfection, thus leading to healthy industry development and positive social effects.Consequently,businesses themselves are surely to benefit more from a wholesome market environment.凯程考研集训营,为学生引路,为学员服务!
人口增长类
1999年真题。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Effect of the country’s growing human population on its wildlife
2.Possible reason for the effect.3.Your suggestion for wildlife protection.真题分析:
本题为多年来考研作文短文题目中仅有的一道纯图表题目。图中只给出了一大一小两幅简单的线形图,要求考生分析两幅图之间的关系,总结出题目的主题和内涵。
针对本题,我们所要做的第一步是仔细阅读图中的文字说明和数据,特别注意数据的变化趋势。但是,在文章中切忌简单罗列所有数据,不仅会使文章无端地增加长度,还会使考官无法抓住文章主题。对于数据的处理一般都是进行概括分析,仅举几个典型的数据为例来说明问题。
第一幅线形图中,美国人口在1800年至1980年至短短200年之间增长了近250倍,而从1700年至1900年200年间美国的生物灭绝速度却增加了70倍。人口增长的速度和物种灭绝的速度正好成正比。由此可以推断,题目要求考生认清这两者之间的关系,认识到人口的增长和扩展严重威胁到了物种的生存,从而要求考生在文章中分析问题产生的原因,提出解决方案。
范文:
Currently, there is a widespread concern about the previously neglected connection betweengrowing human population and decreasing wild species.As the two graphs obviously portrayed, American population in 1980 was 250 times than that in 1800,a trend accompanied bythe extinction of nearly 70 kinds of wildlife in the past 300 years.A clear correlation is suggested thatmankind hasexerted atremendously negativeinfluenceon natural species.There are many factors responsible for the aforementioned tendency.First and foremost, to satisfy the space demand for theboomingpopulation,the only available solutionfor Americans is totake occupation offorests and grassland.that used to be habitat of wild animals and plants.Furthermore, the process of industrialization and urbanization hasgeneratedsevere pollution that essentially destroys environment andecosystem.In my point of view, thedearthof wildlife today forecasts anunpromisingfuture for humans tomorrow.In order toeliminatespecies extinction, relevant laws and regulations must be established and enforced to maintain a large portion ofunspoiledareas.Effective measures should also be applied to ensure thatthe impact of pollution be removed.环境保护类
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(1)2000年真题。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Describe the pictures
2.Deduce the purpose of the artist of the pictures.3.Suggest counter-measures.真题分析:
本题的题目是一组图,其中上下两幅图形成了鲜明的对比。考生需要抓住的细节包括年代的差别(分别是1900年和1995年,相隔约一个世纪)、渔船数量的差别、海洋中鱼的数量差别。这时只要简单地加以分析就可以发现,画图者的意图是警告人们,如果人类继续无节制地开发自然资源,那么总有一天自然资源将会彻底枯竭,最终威胁到人类自己的生存。考生需要分析画图者的本意,并提出相应的解决措施。
这里需要再次提醒的一点是,在第一段描述图中内容时,要用过去时来说明两个不同年代的情况。
范文:
The picture unveils a drastic change ofocean ecology during the past century due to theexpandingscaleof world commercial fishing.There were few fishing ships on the sea in 1900 when anenormousnumber of fish swam freely;in contrast, in 1995 a large fleet of ships were endeavoring tosearch forthe only fish in the sea.The tremendous contrast presented by the drawing alarmingly reminds usof thedetrimentaldeteriorationof oceanic ecosystem by the greediness of mankind.The industry of commercial fishing had undergone a booming expansionalong withthe growing public awareness of the merits of seafood, which made fishing unusuallyprofitable.Lacking knowledge regardingthe significance of ecological balance, businessmen sent out ships thatinsatiablychased fishes and thusposed a severe threat toall life in the sea.However, this trend may in turnendangerhumankind.To prevent theexhaustionof ocean resources, governments should unite to work out effective measures against commercial fishing.For instance, there should be limitations on fishing time and location so as to reduce theexploitationof the sea.Moreover, people alsocall forlaws and regulations that are responsible for punishingexcessivefishing.Last but not the least, the public attachment to the importance of balance preservation would play a decisive role in saving ocean species from extinction.情感类
(1)2001年真题。Directions:
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.凯程考研集训营,为学生引路,为学员服务!
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper.Write an essay to the newspaper to:
1)show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,2)give a specific example, and
3)give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
本题的出题者预设了一个情景,即最近报纸上正在进行关于“爱”的大讨论,要求考生根据给出的图为报社写一篇相关的文章。其实无论题目中是否给出了一个具体的情景,对于考生的写作基本上没有什么大的影响。考生可以简单考虑或者忽略给定情景,而专注于对图画的分析和解读。
这幅图内容非常简单,一盏画着笑脸火焰的油灯,以及上面的一行字“爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮”,相当于中国古语中“雪中送炭”的效果。该图的寓意非常深刻,说明人们在困境中得到的帮助是非常珍贵的,从而鼓励人人在他人困难的时候献出爱心,互相帮助。
范文:
The light of an oil lamp isapproximatelyinsignificant in the daytime;however, the darker the environment is, the more brilliant it seems,just as is depicted in the picture.The importance of love,to some extent, can be interpreted according to a similar logic—love is more precious when it is given to those who are in difficulties andadversities.To specify this statement, I would like to takeKong Fansenas an example.Kong, instead ofsettling forhis comfortable official position in the rich andwell-offProvince of Shandong,volunteeredto serve in a most backward area in Tibet where the weather isnotoriouslyabominable.Kong was consistentlydedicated tothe fulfillment of the principle of “serving the people”, and he always appeared at the most critical moments of local residents’ hardship andimpediment.Freezing as it was in Tibet, Kong’s love and care largely warmed people’s hearts.Kong’s story, suggest that the best practice to show love is to help those who are in need.We should always be ready to provide assistance to others, even if it is merely minor things like listening to others’ troubles.A little of our generosity might brighten the whole world of the unfortunate.文化交流类
2002年真题。Directions:
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures-National and International”.In the essay you should:
{C}1){C}describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and
{C}2){C}give your comment on the phenomenon.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
本题体现了考研短文出题的多样性,采用了一张照片而不是传统的图画。这张照片十分
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具有感染力,但其中的难点是考生如何分析出图画的主题。我们可以看到题目中提示我们照片是一个美国女孩,因此我们可以将她引申为西方文化和思想的代表。而她身穿的中式服装则是中国传统和文化的代表。这身中式服装显然很适合美国女孩,而且女孩脸上甜蜜的笑容也说明她非常喜欢自己的装束。因此,我们可以认为这种和谐的氛围代表了西方人对于中国文化的接受、欣赏和认同。这就是本题的大致分析思路。
考生可以结合当今世界的全球化趋势来说明文化既是民族的,也是世界的。中国应当在国内外大力弘扬其优秀的传统文化,吸引全世界的眼球,并达到中国和世界各国文化的共同发展。
范文:
It is a very eye-catching photo in whichan American girl is content in showing her traditional Chinese costume.She fits perfectly in the well-decorated hat, earrings, andsplendidrobe that apparentlyoriginate froma Southern Chinese ethnic group.What makes this picture extraordinary is the girl’s moving smile, which clearly indicates a westerner’s recognition and appreciation of Chinese culture.The sense of harmony thatpermeatesthis picture is representative of a new global tendency, that is, people of different nations begin to seek profoundmutualunderstanding and friendly communication.As a result, cultures become international.China, in particular,unveilsits previously mysterious image to the rest of the world by its open policy, and thus provides foreigners with the access of a rich anddiversifiedgalleryof traditional Chinese culture.The effect of such communication can be best exemplified by the recent years’ fashion to celebrate the traditional Chinese new year—the Spring Festival globally.While people belong to nations, cultures know no boundary.Thecontemporaryglobalization is not onlyfeaturedby frequent international trades, economic and political exchanges, but more importantly, by global citizens’ awareness andcomprehensionof the cultures in the world.I firmly believe that theblendof cultures is contributing, and will contribute more, to world peace, development, and prosperity.教育类
(1)2003年真题。Directions:
Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
2)point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
这又是一组对比的组图,非常简单明了。两张图的大背景都是暴风雨交加的恶劣天气,在左边的图中,花朵在温室中绚烂地开放;而右图中,同样的一朵花在离开了温室之后就黯然凋谢了。组图题为“温室花朵经不起风雨”,考生稍加分析就可以发现该图并不只是谈论花朵,而更是指向了我们平时所说的“祖国的花朵”们,也就是孩子们,这就自然而然地和社会问题联系在了一起。中国在实施了计划生育之后,独生子女们成为了家里的“小皇帝”、凯程考研集训营,为学生引路,为学员服务!
“小公主”,受到全家人的百般呵护,从小就在蜜罐中长大。这些孩子们人生道路几乎都是一帆风顺,没有经历过大的困难和挫折,因此一旦离开了父母的保护,就很容易由于经不起各种社会现实的打击而一蹶不振。通过这番分析,我们就可以得出文章的主要论点,即受到过分溺爱的孩子们经不起挫折和逆境。
范文:
As the title indicates, “greenhouse flowers cannot survive unpleasant weather”,the set of pictures apparently reminds us thatexcessiveprotection only leads to negative results.When a flowerblossomsin the greenhouse despite of theexternalrain and thunder, itwithersimmediately once being moved out of itscozyhaven.Children in China are always compared to “the flowers of our motherland”.It is alarming thata large portion ofthem are in danger of experiencing a similarmisfortuneto the flower in the picture.This is partly attributed tothe birth of a generation of “only children”, who are quite pampered and spoiled by their parents.Leading a life full of success, love and sweetness, these children are quite ignorant of failure, hardship, and the taste of tears thatabound inreal life.Therefore, when they leave home, they might be overly sensitive to frustration and easily suffer depression that prevents them from a happy and promising future.This type of child is not what we hope for the future of our country.On the contrary, we need tonurturea generation that is fully prepared for independent life, so that it is ready to confront any challenge, adapt to changes of environment, and survive the heated competition in today’s world.人生价值类
2004年真题。Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the drawing,2)interpret its meaning, and
3)support your view with examples.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
本题承袭了考研漫画内容简洁、寓意深刻的风格。一个满头大汗的运动员正冲破了一次长跑比赛的终点,而在终点的不远处,赫然标着两个大字“起点”。通过漫画的题目“终点又是新起点”,考生很容易就可以抓住本题的中心论点:在人生道路上,我们不能仅仅满足于一两次的成功,而只有不断地追求,我们才能取得进步和发展。这也符合哲学上事物是不断发展的这一趋势和真理。针对这类人生奋斗类的题型,一般提纲都会要求考生举出事例,即使提纲没有要求,考生最好也能够写出一两个事例,以增强文章的说服力。一般来说,在这种情况下,举残疾人、先进人物等的例子会比较切题,有效地加强文章的力度。
范文:
The picture presentsa young runner who just finishes a long run and arrives at the finish line,sweating and smiling.While he stand at the end, a sign stating “beginning” lies not far away from his position, indicating that “an end means
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a new beginning”.It is true thatwhen a runner reaches the end of one race, he needs to realize that his immediate task is how toachievethe next goal, instead of indulging the pastgloryandaccomplishment.Theidenticaltruth applies to every individual, organization, and nation, that setting new goals continuously is the source ofadvancement.Thedeaf and muteAmerican girl Helen Kelleris a typical example of our case, as she had spent her whole life struggling and striving for one goal after another.It is not surprising thatshe finallyturned out to bean excellent writer.Equally, businesses and industries should keep setting new tasks in order to preserve their competitiveness.Microsoft, for instance, never ceases creating new products the companylaunchedVista, Office 2007 and Exchange Server recently though it is already being such a hugeconglomerate.In short, it isnon-stopefforts that lead to progress.家庭关系类
(1)2005年真题。Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
本题是非常典型的看图作文。乍一看这是一场非常奇怪的足球赛,竟然有四个球门。仔细一看才发现原来这是一场赡养老人足球赛。我们很容易就可以发现其中人物关系。守着四个球门的是老人的三个儿子和一个女儿,他们的衣着显示出了他们有足够的经济能力来赡养父亲,但是他们都不愿意承担这个责任。很明显出题者要求考生批判这种不良社会风气,对那些不愿意赡养老人的儿女们提出谴责,并指出尊敬老人是我们中华民族的传统美德,应该继续发扬。
范文:
The cartoon displays a very special and thought-provokingsoccer game: the four goals are kept by an old man’s three sons and one daughter, while the old man himself becomes the ball, being kicked among the four corners by his “beloved” children.It is clearly indicated that none of them is willing to spare atinyportion of time and money to repay their old father who have raised them.Through the artistic presentation, we can be easily remindedof a popular phenomenon in today’s society, that is,disrespecttowards elders andshirkingof the responsibility ofnursingaging parents.The boosting economic development in China sadly witnesses adeteriorationof the public awareness offilialduty, which had taken anindispensableposition in traditional Chinese values for thousands of years.However, as the society grows morebenefit-oriented, the once unbrokenbondbetween parents and children is fundamentally shaken and begins tocollapse.In my point of view, the trend goes quite against the genuine and original purpose ofour pursuit of wealth and welfare, that is, to shape a rich life both materially
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and mentally.Thinking of the love we received from our parents whenswaggeringbabies, we must realize that repaying parents by a happy life with financial and psychological support is not only a duty that should not beshrugged off, but a key element to achieve a harmonious society.社会热点类
(1)2006年真题。Directions:
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the photo briefly,2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and
3)give your points of view.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真题分析:
本题又出现了照片,而且这一次是两幅照片。但是这两幅照片没有对比关系,只是并列关系,用来说明同一个问题。左图中一个男子将贝克汉姆的名字写在自己的脸上,右图另一个男子不惜花300元来做一个“小贝头”,这两种现象都是源自他们对于贝克汉姆的疯狂崇拜。明星崇拜在我们现在这个社会中已经见怪不怪了,正是人们的追星使得娱乐业发展成为了一个巨大的产业。许多青少年和年轻人只是因为某个明星歌唱得好,或者戏演得好,或者长得帅气或者漂亮,就盲目地对他们进行崇拜,模仿明星的一言一行,而对于其中良莠不齐的影响不加辨别、全盘吸收,从而影响了他们自身的成长和发展。因此,我们很容易就可以判断出本题的目的在于指出年轻人应该树立正确的世界观、人生观、价值观,树立积极向上的人生追求和生活方式。
范文:
The two pictures illustrate vividlythe popularity of the famous British soccer star David Beckham.In the left picturea man painted Beckham’s name on his face to show his support for Beckham,while in the rightanother is willing to spend three hundred yuan to have a hairstyle that is exactly the same as Beckham’s.From the two pictures we can sensea crazy tendency of idol worship in today’s China.Star fans, the majority of whom areteenagersand young adults, are used toblindlyfollowing every aspect ofcelebrities’behavior, accepting both positive and negative influences asuniversaltruths.Aside fromBeckham, anothertellingexample is the nation-wide “Super-Girl competitions” held in past two years in China.They were so successful in drawing fans’ attention and emotions that theups and downsof the “super girls” had almostconstitutedthe whole lives of theirfreneticfollowers.Admittedly,it is natural thatthose cool and fashionable stars seem attractive to the youth.Nevertheless, it is the responsibility of our government and society to guide young people in building awholesomeoutlook towards the world and life.In my opinion, what’s most important is to have themadoreworthyvalues and qualities, such as honesty,diligence, andpersistence.考研成功难又不难,一旦大家开始准备就要全力以赴。自制力差的学生可以找几个研友,互相激励,因为坚持下来也确实不容易,也看个人习惯,有的同学可能一个人学习更有效率;
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在这个过程中更主要的还有大家坚持的信念,坚持完成一件事情本身就是成功。
在三百多天的日子里,老师会一直陪伴着大家,里边的每条微博、微信、咨询都是温暖大家并激励大家前行的动力。奔跑吧,2016的考生们!
虽然有突破口、也有规律可循,但这并不意味着我们可以一劳永逸、高枕无忧,要知道,想要精通世界上任何一门语言,除非有天生的语言天分,否则偷不得半分懒,只能勤勤恳恳反复练习。一遍不懂读两遍,默念不行就大声念出来,遇到不认识的单词就查,不懂的句子就静下心来拆分结构。总之,读书百遍、其义自现,英语学习之路上没有笨蛋,只有懒人。综上就是小编给大家提供的高分技巧,技巧就是牢固的知识点和强悍的答题思路,预祝所有考生2016考研有个好成绩。
小提示:目前本科生就业市场竞争激烈,就业主体是研究生,在如今考研竞争日渐激烈的情况下,我们想要不在考研大军中变成分母,我们需要:早开始+好计划+正确的复习思路+好的辅导班(如果经济条件允许的情况下)。2017考研开始准备复习啦,早起的鸟儿有虫吃,一分耕耘一分收获。加油!
第二篇:考研英语作文怎么拿高分
考研英语作文怎么拿高分
众所周知,考研试卷满分100分,而在在考研英语的五大项目之中,阅读的分值最高,占到到满分的40分,其次是写作,占到30分。从比例上而言,阅读和写作这两大块就占据了整个考研英语的70%,其在备考过程中的重要性不言而喻。下面,【考研1号】就以《写作160篇》为例,给大家讲讲在备考过程中如何准备写作方面的备考,提高自己的写作水平?
首先,对于考研英语的写作备考,大家必须学习和掌握大量的不同话题的范文、句式、词汇及词组搭配,扩充自己知识面,只有在见多识广时才能有东西写,才能写出你想要的东西。《写作160篇》作为第一本全面涵盖当年可考话题的写作书,其精华正体现在一个“全”字上——每年都会精心筛选、分类当年全部可考话题,使得每年的考研作文话题完全不能跳出其话题圈子以外。所以,其连续7年命中考研英语作文北非偶然,而是一种必然。
很多考生在备考过程中,并没有注意到考研作文选材的一个特点:考研英语作文的选材均为当今社会的热门话题,并且十分贴近生活,从电视广告到网络,从父母与子女的关系到拥有健康的重要性,从环境保护到“乐观主义”,无不反映了当前公众最为关注的话题。所以,如何系统的了解当年的热点话题,并在平时的备考中加以练习,就显得十分重要。而《写作160篇》涵盖话题之广泛,选择范文之新颖,正好满足了广大考生扩充自己知识面,全面了解考研可考话题的需求。写作的分数高低取决于两个方面:
一、语言功底;
二、思想深度、文章结构。而第二点的提高则主要主要取决于的见多识广。因为我们谁也不知道,命题人会出哪方面的作文。我们只有全面撒网,重点培养,浏览《写作160篇》中的各种不同类型话题,多看多练,提高我们的写作能力,缩小写作的命题范围。平时对各种写作素材加以积累,准备和练习,在考试中遇到同类话题时,大家才不会惊慌,觉得话题陌生,久久没有思路,无法下笔。
其次,我们来讨论一下话题与模板到底哪个更为实用。《写作160篇》王林老师认为,对于模板的问题,应该分情况来看。如果准备考试的时间比较短,特别是对于在职考研的研友而言,准备一些80-100字的万用模版可以减轻很多的工作量,毕竟工作和考研两者都是个巨大的消耗。而对于应届或者时间比较充裕的研友来说,4-5个月的时间,完全可以突破作文,并没有必要刻意去准备模版。通过考试前的写作练习,总结出自己适用的模版,在考试时候发挥出来,既顺手又可以出彩,效果比准备现成的模版要好处许多。因为万能模范的适用范围毕竟有限,有些情况下硬套这些模版写出来的作文读起来会很不自然。总结起来,《写作160篇》的目标就是要让考生,在广泛阅读熟悉,甚至背诵记忆书中各类话题作文范文的基础上,总结出属于自己的模板,因为自己在平时的练习与积累中总结出来的模板,肯定比照搬别人的模板用起来顺手嘛。并且,也避免了往年考研英语作文中出现的几大问题。
问题
一、模板中的句型套用不正确,不完整。
比如,我们在书信结尾的时候会说I am looking forward to hearing from you.而有的学生却把这句话写成了I am looked forward to hear from you.这种现象非常普遍,可见,某些使用万能模板的学生,其写作态度并不是很端正,很认真。而《写作160篇》则强调的是在平时的备考中,通过对题材的了解,用自己的方式写出属于自己的句子,注意语法点,如此一来,考生在平时的写作中,不仅加强了对话题的了解,还会在写作中加强了自己的语法水平,绝对不会犯这种低级的语法错误。
问题
二、模板中的句型和实际写作内容不匹配。
比如:有的图画作文第二段要求根据图画所表达的含义进行深层次的论证,而学生套用的句型却是第二段写对比的句型,显然是没有正确理解模板句型使用的语言背景。再比如:小作文的摘要,是要根据汉语文章归纳出中心内容进行英语写作,这个一般都是客观的描述,而学生却用了一个写图画作文的模板,通篇都是“我”认为,这如何又能得高分呢?这也正是《写作160篇》屡次强调,大家要在平时的备考中拓展自己的话题写作素材量,争取了解每类话题的写作思路和行文方式,总结出属于自己的模板的原因。
问题
三、模板套用千篇一律,没有新意。
再好的模板,如果所有的学生都在用也,它也就变成了一张白纸,一杯白开水,读来没有任何亮点,寡然无味。而这个错误也正是很多急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的。我们需要的是正是对各类话题的综合把握,在范文的基础上写出属于自己的东西。《写作160篇》中的高分佳句所提倡的“举一反三”观点,正是缘于这一原因。写作时要“理论联系了实际”,首先要练习考研英语写作真题。只有练了真题才能对于出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。不要一味的模仿范文写作,自己要在书的经典里提取精华,学会自己创作。
再次、怎样使用很多写作书中的范文,是很多考生所面临的一个问题?很多考生会选择历年真题的范文和一些与写真题作文相近的文章狂背,但最终发现,在写作时并没有实际用到。对此,《写作160篇》提倡,应该多读,多记,多背。多读:多思考《写作160篇》中范文对于话题的剖析方法和行文思路,写作的常用词汇,记住其中一些比较好的用法。如果复习时只是一味埋头苦练的话,那只能提高写作速度而在写作水平上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章,才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看历年考生高分样文。看的时候不要只看懂就行,而要着眼于三个方面:高分范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的,运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的,段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的,运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。能够举一反三,仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话,那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。
多背,不能只是懵懂的瞎背,要有注重。应该多背《写作160篇》中总结的文章框架、精彩句构、点睛语言。对于范文的背诵也不能全面撒网,没有计划的乱背一气,《写作英语160篇》中篇和下篇范文部分的内容对于学习的要求也是不尽相同的。“经典必背”强调的一是注意此类话题的可靠性很大,其次就是要注意对于该部分话题的模板框架,行文思路和内容素材的背诵记忆,学会活用框模板,注重素材的积累,同时要适当加入自己的内容。“重点预测”部分内容,不要一字不差的照抄无误,而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词,长句,而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达,这样才能真正显示写作的水平。所以这部分的要求是要考生着重积累文中的常用短语或者词组,高分佳句,以备写作之用。“熟悉浏览”则要求考生扩充自己的知识面,对这部分话题加以熟悉了解,做到考试时知道怎么写,加入那些素材。
最后、我不得不提的是《写作160篇》除了话题较全之外的其他两大闪光点:书中的“考生习作点评”和增值服务的“在线作文修改点评”。众所周知,作文光靠背是不行的,毕竟作文是要自己写出来的。那么平时应该怎样写,写完之后又怎样确实地了解自己现阶段的写作水平呢?
《写作160篇》提醒大家模板只是给了考生一个写作的思路和框架,但是要想获得高分,就要充分了解各类话题,扩充自己的知识面和写作素材。在框架之上填加自己的内容,把模板变成自己的东西,只有文章中有自己的内容,才会吸引判卷老师的眼球!在每年的12月前应该每周写一篇作文并且要把每一篇写好。临近考试,可以按照规定时间写作,此时写作的题目要广泛,对于《写作160篇》中的各种话题都要写一些,以增强适应性。可是写完之后,考生该如何进行自测呢?《写作160篇》为大家提供了两个途径:
一、《写作160篇》书中包含的“考生习作点评”部分。
考研英语作文要求大家能“知己知彼”,只有深刻的了解了别人的写作水平之后,自己才会有压力,才能争取做到改正自己现存的其他人也常犯的错误,进而超越别人,在考研写作中超出大多数考生的写作水平,获取高分。《写作160篇》中“考生习作点评”的原文收集了2012版《写作160篇》读者的写作练习,从构思框架到遣词造句等多个角度对其进行系统性的点评,明确指出读者练习中的各类错误、出错原因以及修改意见,有助于2013考生有针对性地进行比较和提高。本部分包含写作原文、写作点评(各段点评、总体点评、修改意见、参考分数)和修改展示三方面。习作原文的作者是2012备考学生,其基础和大家都是处于一个水平线上,这样大家就不仅了解同一水平线上考生的写作水平,同时也能和自己的写作水平作比较,便于自己的作文水平自测,以获得不断的提高。
二、《写作160篇》增值服务为大家提供的“在线作文修改点评”。
虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用,在平时也进行了一些训练,但是面对自已“难产出来”的文章,怎么看怎么满意,却不知里面充满了很多基本的语法错误,以及和考研英语写作要求格格不入的内容。而《写作160篇》提供的“在线作文修改点评”栏目中,参与作文批改的老师这些年接触了大量的考研学生,深刻地了解了考研作文的要求、阅卷老师评分的批准、考生易犯的错误,据此会提出更为专业、有效的提升方案,能帮考生在短时间内快速提高成绩。《写作160篇》提醒大家:练习写作要有决心、信心和恒心。要日积月累、细水长流、坚持不断。要以滴水穿石的精神去背记、改写和套用。同时要讲究方法。
第三篇:高考作文如何拿高分
高考作文如何拿高分 评卷老师心得
高考评卷工作量非常大,要在几天的时间完成,阅卷的速度可想而知,每份作文必须在60秒内完成。不可能细细地看,只能从审题立意、标题(含小标题)、结构安排(含开头、结尾,层次扣题点题)、素材(或事例)的运用、字数、书写等方面评分。
因此,考场作文应注意如下几个方面:
一、立意要明确,观点要鲜明。
1、“赞成什么、反对什么”必须明确。
“三明”:中心明确、结构明快、语言明朗
2、思想健康。
(1)不反党、反社会主义,不反科学、反道德、反《中学生守则》;(2)不犯政治错误、情感性错误、偏激性错误(如社会没好人、生活没意思、同情本拉登、高考摧残人、老师不负责、将爱情进行到底等等);(3)要积极向上,不能意志消沉。
二、结构合理,题意要点明。
1、开头简明,开门见山(尽量在50字内表明题意或观点)
2、点题、扣题,在每层次开头和结尾点题(例如《走向成熟》)
3、当立意把握不准时,要有紧扣主题的响亮而又有哲理的语句(救命句)
4、段落安排最好是5—7段
三、标题要生动。
1、题好一半文(人靠衣装,文靠题装)
2、好标题的原则:
(1)显示题意(材料的主旨、作者的感情);
(2)生动新颖(运用修辞、巧妙化用)。例如①话题“答案是丰富多彩的”——标题《横看成 岭侧成峰》②话题“诚信”——标题《美丽的背囊》、《生命诚可贵,诚信价更高》
3、修改标题
《旧事重提》改为:《朝花夕拾》
《说高考》或《爱与恨》改为:《道是无晴却有晴》(晴——情)《行走在消逝的感伤中》改为:《伤逝》
《溺爱》改为:《有一种爱叫伤害》
《敢于模仿》改为:《可爱的东施》
四、文体要明确,不能“四不像”。
五、材料要典型、丰富,有正反例子作比较。
六、行文流畅、明快、有文采,适当引用名言名句。
七、结尾照应开头,点题,有升华(深刻、有哲理、有韵味,有更进一层的意思)。
八、字数要超800(最好在850字左右),书写要端庄。1
第四篇:面试如何拿高分
如果你服从了我对简历和求职信的发起并获得了精良的效果,那么,你就不用客气了。可如果你不剖析我的发起,写了长达一零页的求职信和二零页的简历仍然得到了口试的机会,那么,我要庆贺你,而且还要向你致歉。
无论是什么环境,横竖你靠自己的技巧、对峙不懈和运气得到了口试机会。所以,你马上就要单独面对口试官们的轮番“打击”,而且你无法寄托“退格键”来修改任何口误。那么,你应该怎么办呢?
起首,你要明确,你正在申请的是一份要有人来做的工作,而且他们试图弄清你是否便是那份工作的恰当人选。为此,口试官会依赖他们在口试过程中的感知和判断。
比如说,我想知道一位员工盼望得到提拔、勇于进取。我的推测逻辑是,一位在口试中谈及升职的员工,在工作中会越发勤勉。但是,另一位口试官或曾经遭遇过某个一心想升职却完不可本职工作的员工。如果你对那位经理人的这种担心不敏感,喋喋不断地大谈你是怎么通过挑灯夜读获得MBA学位的,那么,你就不会得到那份工作。
如果你怀有这样的想法——自己应该倾听并对面前的口试官做出反响,而不会自觉服从什么规矩,那么,我就把我的口试规矩呈献给你吧:
一.妥善着装。如果你要去特大型金融团体公司口试,穿商务套装十分恰当。如果你是位老师,要系上领带,哪怕是在很随意的加利福尼亚州。
二.闭上嘴巴。我和你讲过这种情况吗——来口试的人给我讲了四五分钟他的生活故事,只给我留下一零分钟的工夫用来表明工作?我想,你很清楚故事的末了结局。
三.倾听。在销售中,最重要的技巧便是倾听——而口试的过程,也便是你在推销自己的过程。在口试官谈到他的iPho职场ne手机当前,如果你说:“我以为天下上最好的计算机便是装有微软操纵系统的小我私家电脑,利用苹果机的人都是重形式轻本质的人”,那么,你就只能带着你的观点离开了,你自然也挣不到这份工作的薪水了。
四.提出题目。面对“你以为我们应该摧毁这里全部的小我私家电脑买苹果机吗?”这样的题目,你可以以“这取决于许多因素。你的需求是什么呢?”作答,以制止呈现下面的题目。
五.表现出兴趣。这也可以称为“示好”。如果一个来口试的人不向口试官提出任何干于他的题目,那么,她不但即是在说“我对自己的成就深感自豪,无须投你所好”,她还向口试官表明她不擅长表现出对别人的兴趣。这就意味着她在公司与人相处会有贫苦。既然这样,工作机会就不会给她。
六.自己提前做调研。有些人觉得被人用谷歌搜索很不惬意。不过,如果你警惕从事,你就能向负责招聘的经理表明,你在相识他们方面是花了工夫的。不妨就服务处面临的技能挑战题目,直接引用他们在《首席信息官》(CIO)杂志上的发言。不过千万不要谈及你通过“谷歌地球”(Google Earth)看到他们的游泳池有多大。
七.答复你希望他们问到的题目。这是罗伯特?麦克纳马拉(Robert McNamara)(一九一六年-二零零九年,美国贩子、政治家,美国共和党人,曾任美国国防部长和天下银行行长——译者注)在谈到与媒体打交道时所说的话,不过,对被口试者而言,它同样是个十分好的发起。你有几多次带着“我始终没有机会告诉他们我在负鼠研讨上获得诺贝尔奖的事变”的遗憾离开口试场所的呢?不要等他们提出题目。面对“你最近的那份工作是干什么的?”这个题目,你可以答复“现实上,你们可能会觉得,我最近两份工作之前那个研讨负鼠的工作与这个工作的干系最亲昵”。
第五篇:2016高考英语作文-六步拿高分
一)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)(account for)the phenomenon(problem)。
2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that……
4.The factors that contribute to this situation include……
5.The change in ……largely results from the fact that……
6.We may blame ……,but the real causes are……
7.Part of the explanations for it is that ……
8.One of the most common factors(causes)is that ……
9.Another contributing factor(cause)is ……
10.Perhaps the primary factor is that …
11.But the fundamental cause is that ……
二)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B,but A suffers from the disadvantages that……
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ……but it would be foolish to claim that……
5.For all the disadvantages,it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else,it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However,the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently,it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think ……,but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is,it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A ……,but the chief faults(obvious defects)are ……
三)批驳
1)It is true that ……,but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements,but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say ……,but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that……
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5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for ……
7)Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9)Contrary to what is widely accepted,I maintain that ……
四)后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is ……
3.It will exercise a profound influence upon……
4.Its consequence can be so great that……
五)举例
1)A good case in point is ……
2)As an illustration,we may take ……
3)Such examples might be given easily.4)……is often cited as an example.六)证明
1)No one can deny the fact that ……
2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately,none of the available data shows ……
4)Recent studies indicate that ……
5)There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
6)According to statistics proved by ……,it can be seen that ……
七)开篇
1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6)Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.7)Faced with ……,quite a few people argue that ……
8)According to a recent survey,……
9)With the rapid development of ……,……
八)结尾
1)From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that ……
2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
4)In conclusion,it is imperative that ……
5)There is no easy method,but ……might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem,we must ……
7)In summary,if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue,more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned,the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause ;it is important to take actions to ……
10)Taking all these into account,we ……
11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative,one thing is certain/clear……