第一篇：预测作文
预测作文
（一）Luxurious Buildings On Campus
近年来，一些大学建起豪华楼舍来提升形象；
有人赞同，有人反对；
3.谈谈你的观点。
【范文】
With a view to improving their image and, many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions.Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more comfortable environment could let students apply themselves to academic studies.The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities.Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of the modern students.But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would
disappear.Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students.Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements.【点评】
首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述人们对此现象各持己见；第三段陈述自己的观点，并提出建议。
范文首段提出大学楼舍“豪华风”这一普遍现象；第二段指出赞同者认为舒适的环境能让学生更好地投入学业中，反对者认为这不仅浪费钱，而且扰乱了正常教学活动；第三段给出自己的观点---旧楼的拆除破坏了校园原有的历史意义；奢华的趋势使得大学教育商业化，给大学生带来负面影响。最后提出建议，希望大学能注重提高自身的文化内涵，加强学科建设。
第一段中With a view to意为“为了”，后面接v.-ing；第二段中apply themselves to academic studies意为“全身心投入学业”；第三段中construction of specialties 意为“专业队伍的建设”，improvement of their cultural connotation意为“提高自身文化内涵”。
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（二）On Buying Graduation Thesis
1.毕业论文买卖成风；
2.有人认为本科生没必要写毕业论文，有人认为有必要；
3.你的看法。
【范文】
Since graduation thesis serves as a role of evaluation, college students are required to write academic essays focusing on their major before graduation.Afraid of not getting their degree, buying graduation thesis has become a prevailing practice.Consequently, heated discussion on the issue has been arisen.Some don't think it is necessary to write the graduation essay while the others support the current educational system.However, the main argument for scrapping essays is because most of them are of such a low quality.As this work is usually assigned in the last term, exactly when they are starting to hunt for jobs, it is no wonder that they are not fully focused on the task.Furthermore, the communication between student and tutor is far from adequate.Nevertheless, I still believe that thesises are something from which students can gain a lot if they put their heart into the task.【点评】
文章首段通过毕业论文的用途引出社会现象----买卖论文成风；第二段指出不同的人对此持有不同意见；第三段结合自身观点，分析现象产生的原因：毕业论文一般是最后一学期完成，而学生忙于找工作导致论文质量低，另外学生和导师的沟通不够，最后给出自己的观点---毕业论文对于学生而言很重要，如果用心去做，学生可以从中学到很多。
第一段中serves as a role of evaluation意为“起着评估的作用”；第二段中Consequently意为“随之产生，因此”；
第三段中are of such a low quality意为“质量低”，fully focused on意为“集中精力关注于”。
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（三）The Spirit of Lei Feng
1.雷锋精神学了半个世纪，雷锋却越来越少；
2.当下我们该如何弘扬雷锋精神？
【范文】
Lei Feng, a heroic model in China who was known for his altruism and devotion to the country, has been taken as a role model over past 50 years.But in recent years, some people have abandoned their long-held ways of learning from Lei Feng and become too selfish to helping people in need.In today's diverse society, where individual interests are given more emphasis, the image of Lei Feng seems to have lost its appeal to some people, and is even met with cynicism.But everybody can do the basics: show more compassion, have a stronger sense of obligation and try to do good, no matter how small it is.Furthermore, governments should pay more attention to morality construction, raise people's willingness to help others, let them realize that altruism is always necessary for a harmonious society and provide fuel to the flame so it can burn more brightly.【点评】
文章第一段通过介绍雷锋，说明雷锋精神，引出社会现象：有些人变得自私，不愿帮助那些需要帮助的人；第二段指出过分强调个人利益使得雷锋形象失去原有魅力，为弘扬雷锋精神，个人应该有强烈的责任感，勿以善小而不为，政府应该加强道德建设，提高人们助人为乐的意识。
文章第一段中altruism意为“无私，利他主义”，devotion意为“奉献”； taken as a role model意为“作为榜样”；
第二段第一句中涉及where引导的定语从句，修饰先行词society，cynicism意为“冷嘲热讽，玩世不恭”，sense of obligation意为“义务感，使命感”；Furthermore表示递进。
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（四）Influence of Digital Products on College Students
数码产品种类多，更新快，大学生人均拥有数码产品的数量越来越多；
这种现象对大学生来说是有益还是有害？
你的看法。
【范文】
Currently, college students are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of digital products, such as digital cameras, laptops, cell phones and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and quantities.Many students continuously update their “equipments” to meet their over-growing needs.Meanwhile people show great concerns about the influence of those products.There is no doubt that digital products make things more convenient for college students.For instance, computers and Internet enable students to collect information with greatly improved work efficiency.What's more, digital items widen students'scope of eyesight and make their life more colorful.Although these items also cause negative effects, as they may waste their precious time and cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life.Neverthless, I cherish a belief that with the help of digital products, college students can benefit a lot and the world will have a wonderful future.【点评】
文章第一段指出现在的大学生不可避免的接触各种数码产品，并且根据需求不断更换产品，这一现象引起人们关注于产品给大学生带来的影响。第二段首先指出数码产品的优势，并列举一种产品进行说明；之后分析了产品带来的负面影响，并给出作者自己的观点。
第一段中unavoidably意为“不可避免地”；are exposed to意为“接触”；in an increasing categories and quantities 意为“种类和数量不断增加”。第二段中There is no doubt that… 意为“„„毫无疑问”；For instance表示列举；cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life意为“培养出与现实生活脱节的一代人”。
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（五）Free Blood Donation
1.无偿献血的意义；
2.作为一名大学生，你认为该如何做？
【范文】
Free blood donation refers to healthy donators voluntarily giving a small amount of blood.It doesn't harm the donators' health as their bodies could make quick adjustment.It is a kind of way by which people can make contribution to society and realize self-value.However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood.As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation.First of all, a nation-wide campaign should be launched to educate people scientific
knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood.Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns.Last but not the least, government at all levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve people’s current spiritual civilization.【点评】
文章第一段从献血的定义入手，提及献血对人体的影响以及献血的意义，最后一句指出问题所在---有部分人不愿加入献血的队伍。第二段从自己作为大学生的角度，提出自己的意见：首先需要开展运动，向人们传授献血方面的科学知识以及血液疾病预防知识；其次，开展提高公共意识的活动；最后各级政府部门应该创建和谐健康的社会。
第一段中 make quick adjustment 意为“快速调整”；make contribution to society 意为“”为社会做贡献”；realize
self-value意为“实现自身价值”。第二段中多次使用被动语态，measures与动词take搭配，campaign与动词 launch搭配，activities 与动词 carry out搭配；表示列举，First of all“首先”，Last but not the least“最后但并非最不重要”。
大学英语六级考试作文预测（2012.5）
恩波教育英语研究所
预测作文
（一）The Pursuit of Foreign Diplomas
1.现在越来越多的大学生热衷于国外文凭；
2.你对此事的看法。
【范文】
Since the education quality of foreign developed countries is thought to be better than that in China, an
increasing number of college students are keen on studying abroad.College students believe that with foreign diplomas they may be considered more competitive than others, and can get more job opportunities or higher salaries.Undoubtedly, studying abroad offers college students chances of learning more advanced knowledge,experiencing different cultures, broadening their views and gaining good command of foreign languages.But the blind pursuit of foreign diplomas may cause a considerable number of students to neglect the pursuit of knowledge, and forget about the huge amount of money they need to prepare.What's more, concentrating on the diploma itself may lead to students who aren't expert at academic studies directly buy fake foreign diplomas.All in all, I think college students should consider clearly what they really want to gain at foreign schools, for an inflated reputation or knowledge.Besides, they should make decisions after careful consideration on the family’s payment ability.【点评】
文章由人们对国外发达国家的教育质量的观点引出社会现象----大学生热衷追求国外文凭。第二段介绍了出国留学的几点优势，并指出对文凭的盲目追求会使得大学生忽视对知识的追求。最后一段结合自己的观点给出建议---大学生应该仔细考虑自身需求，并结合考虑家庭的支付能力。
第一段中 be keen on doing sth.意为“热衷于做某事”；be considered more competitive意为“被认为更有竞争力”。
第二段中Undoubtedly意为“毫无疑问，毋庸置疑”，blind pursuit of foreign diplomas意为“盲目追求国外文凭”；lead to意为“导致”，所在句涉及who引导的定语从句。第三段中All in all意为“总之”，family’s payment ability意为“家庭支付能力”。
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（二）Campus Security
近年来，大学校园安全问题频发；
象牙塔如何能给学生一个安全健康的学习环境？
【范文】
According to recent reports, an increasing number of crimes have taken place on campus.Universities around the world are facing security problems such as theft, fraud, violence, sexual harassment, fire disaster and traffic accident etc., which seriously affect students' school lives and make students live in fear.Therefore, it is high time that we should take actions to improve its current situation.First, related departments, including administrative personnel, teachers and students, should know clearly about their own responsibilities and cooperate to solve the problems.Second, equipments such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Most importantly, we might have to nip something in the bud before it becomes a problem.We should strengthen college students' ideological and political education, pay attention to their mentality health and give timely help if they need.With our endeavor, campus security will be improved greatly, and universities will be holy places where one can enjoy peaceful and harmonious atmosphere again.【点评】
文章第一段指出问题---校园安全问题频发，大学生的学习生活受到严重影响。第二段提出需要解决问题，并给出解决问题的建议：首先相关部门应该弄清自己的职责，共同努力解决问题；其次在校园中安装监控设备，尽早发现犯罪；最后，加强大学生的思想政治教育，防范于未然。
第一段中affect students' school lives意为“影响学生学校生活”；make students live in fear意为“使学生生活在恐慌中”。第二段中to nip something in the bud 意为“防范于未然”；ideological and political education意为“思想品德教育”。
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（三）Working in Grassroots Areas
大学毕业时有人出国留学，有人就职外企以及国企，而有人却选择偏远的农村，将人生扎根于奉献基层群众里，体现了难能可贵的思想觉悟和责任担当；
谈谈你的看法。
College students vary their choices after graduation.Some choose to go abroad for further education, some are willing to work in foreign companies or state-owned enterprises, but there still others choose to work in rural areas, and they hope to realize self-value by working in grassroots communities.As far as I am concerned, I absolutely in favor of this choice of working in grassroots.It is helpful for the development of rural countries.On one hand, college graduates can put into practice what they have learnt during academic years, which can promote economic growth of rural countries.On the other hand, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside, speed the cultural development of rural areas, and bridge the gap between the city and the countryside.What's more, it helps to ease the pressure of job markets in big cities.In conclusion, it is a win-win choice to both college students and society, so more preferential policies should be made in order to encourage college students to work in the countryside.【点评】
文章第一段通过陈述大学生在毕业时不同的选择，引出话题---有的人选择在偏远的农村工作，之后简单提及了在农村工作的意义。第二段结合作者自己的见解，说明这种选择的积极意义----促进农村的经济发展；大学生引入新的思想，促进农村文化发展，缩短城市农村间的差距；缓解城市就业压力。最后一段给出结论：对大学生和社会来说，这是一个双赢的选择。
第一段中realize self-value 意为“实现自身价值”，grassroots communities 意为“基层社区”。第二段中absolutely in favor of意为“绝对支持”，On one hand,…On the other hand意为“一方面„„另一方面”，bridge the gap 意为“缩减差距”。第三段中a win-win choice意为“双赢的选择”。
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（四）Job-hopping
1.现在越来越多学生毕业后经常换工作；
2.有人表示支持，有人表示反对，人们对此看法不一；
3.你的看法。
【范文】Frequent “job hopping” is common among graduates.More and more graduates take changing new jobs as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion.People have different attitudes towards job-hopping.Some think that one should stick to one occupation since one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime.On the contrary, the others support job-hopping as it can offer one more chances of realizing self-value.Before talking about whether it's right or not, I think graduates should ponder over the following basic
questions: Why do you want to find a new job? What kind of jobs do you really like? One shouldn't blindly follow other people in job-hopping, and needn't expect to climb the corporate ladder by job-hopping.Eternal moves can be an effective way of getting a promotion or higher pay, but frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty.What's more, the perfect job should be a combination of interest and work.So make out your plans for career development, think beforehand all those things related with job-hopping, and you will have a brighter life.【点评】文章第一段指出越来越多大学生不断更换工作，人们对此各持己见，然后给出了赞成者和反对者的观点。文章第二段作者指出，大学生在更换工作之前需仔细考虑清楚，防止盲目跟风。虽然跳槽可能会获得升职加薪的机会，但是也会造成雇主对“忠诚度”的怀疑。另外，在跳槽之前应该做好个人职业发展计划。
第一段中as a way of seeking higher salary or getting promotion意为“作为一种升职加薪的途径”，is devoted to意为“致力于，奉献于”；第二段中frequent moves suggest a lack of loyalty意为“频繁的跳槽暗示着缺乏忠诚”，think beforehand意为“提前考虑”。
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（五）My View on Over-consumption
有人认为过度消费会推动经济发展；
有人认为则会导致浪费；
谈谈你的看法。
【范文】
When it refers to over-consumption, some people think it contributes a lot to the economic development of China.It can enrich people's daily life and enlarge consumers' demand，which is an important factor to economic growth.However, other people hold different opinions.They consider it is harmful to consume more than their
everyday needs.Buying things they don't need not only causes waste of resources, but also causes one to be in debt, anxiety and overload.It is true that every coin has two sides.But I think the disadvantages of over-consumption outweigh its advantages.In addition to the above mentioned negative effects, over-consumption could threaten limited
natural resources and pollute our environment.Therefore, this unsustainable way of life should be changed and we should pursue a resource-saving and environmentally-friendly consumption life-style.As our
government is advocating a “conservation-minded society” and an idea of sustainable development, we should cooperate to create a harmonious society.【点评】
文章谈及过度消费，第一段指出赞成者认为过度消费刺激经济发展，第二段指出反对者认为过度消费会造成资源的浪费，并使人陷入债务、焦急不安的状况。第三段给出作者的意见--过度消费弊大于利，因此应该改变生活方式，共同创建和谐社会。
第一段中enlarge consumers' demand意为 “扩大消费者的需要”；第二段中not only…but also 意为“不但„„而且„„”；第三段中outweigh意为“比„„重要”，resource-saving and environmentally-friendly consumption life-style 意为“节省资源，保护环境的生活消费方式”。
第二篇：作文预测
1.Write a letter to a moving company that you have used to move your furniture and let them know you have a problem with some of the items.In your letterExplain what problems you have experienced with the furniture.What are your reasons for leaving 3.Write a letter to a friend in a foreign country who has invited you to their wedding and say: Why can’t you attend the wedding?-Tell them about the gift you are sending.Give details of the purchase.-
Describe the problem.-
What do you expect the company to do about it 6.Write a letter to your friend and invite him/her to a special event that you are organising.Please say
Why do you organize this event? Why do you think he/she should come?What are the problems you are facing?Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.9.One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information.Write a letter to him/her and say when the best period to visit your country isrecommend places to visit in your country
10An international company has opened its new branch in your town.You are interested in working there.Write a letter to the human resources and say: What position are you interested in?Ask for additional information about the company./////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////、2、Some people think that men and women have different qualities.Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Many people believe that women should be given an equal role to men in the military forces or police.Others, however, claim that such occupations are not suitable for women.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males.Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
3.Sometimes people are rejecting a job opportunity due to their age or other circumstances.Is it a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and relevant examples.4、Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed.However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals.Discuss both these views and give your opinion、Unlike other countries, police in UK do not carry guns.Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, other think it reduce the overall violence in the society.Discuss.//Some people think that a police force carrying guns can educate higher level of violence.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
5.Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful.However, it is rare for old people to use them.What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How does the old people to be encouraged using this new technology?
6.6.We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist.What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have?
7.Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment.Discuss both views and how do you think about it?
8.、Many people think it is very important to protect environment(caused by developments of technology)but they make no effort to do it themselves.Why does it happen? How to solve this problem?
9.Some people believe that a country benefits greatly with a high percentage of young people who go to university, while others argue that it only leads to graduate unemployment.Discuss both views and give your opinion.10.Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
11.In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods.This is having a negative effect on both families and societies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Scientists believe that junk food has bad impact on our health.Some people think that people should be educated to consume less of it, while others think that it is pointless.What is your opinion?
12.The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
13、In today’s world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?（1.27新增）
第三篇：作文预测
2015年高考语文作文预测：缺憾也可以演绎完美
阅读下面的材料，按照要求写一篇不少于800字的作文(60分)
医学研究者发现，患心瓣堵塞症的患者，心脏奇迹地增大，好像是在努力应付心脏所带来的缺陷;肾病患者摘去了左肾，那么他的右肾的生命力在术后往往十分强盛。于是，医学研究者得出这样一条规律：一个人一旦身体上有某种缺陷，必然会产生一种弥补的机理与心理。对于上述的故事，你有什么看法?请根据阅读后的感悟和联想，写一篇文章。要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题，不要脱离材料内容及含义范围作文，不要套作，不要抄袭。
【作文范文】 用缺憾演绎完美
医学研究者在大量研究的基础上得出这样一条规律：一个人一旦身体上有某种缺陷，必然会产生一种弥补的机理与心理。人生又何尝不是如此呢?正如《圣经》里曾说：上帝在关闭一扇门的时候，也同时给你打开另一扇窗。这不正告诉我们缺憾并不可怕，只有用缺憾演绎完美，才能铸就辉煌的人生。
生命是条缺憾的河。这条河里虽然有时漂浮着污浊，色彩单一，有时甚至造成泛滥，带来硬伤，但仍然有生命的律动，浪花的欢腾，奔涌气势，从不缺少美的意境。人生谁又能是完美无缺的呢?缺憾并不可怕，可怕的是不知弥补缺憾，任凭缺憾惯穿人生。实际上，正因为有了缺憾与不足，我们才有追求和上进的理由。对缺憾说“不”吧!贝多芬有耳疾的缺憾，却能谱写出世界名曲，张海迪有高位截瘫的残疾，却能成为著名作家、翻译家，影响了一代代人的奋斗进取。缺憾是一条河，必然流过冬季的风里。
正视缺憾需要勇敢。史蒂芬·霍金，还是在剑桥上大学时，就患上一种奇怪的病，但却成就一个“躺在轮椅上的科学家”。仅以智慧的大脑，三个还能活动的手指，保持着与外界的联系与交流，却在世界掀起了阵阵“霍金热”。伊扎克·帕尔曼，一个坐着轮椅登”台表演的小提琴国际大师，凭着一具有缺憾的钢铁之躯，登上了音乐艺术殿堂的最高峰;拥有先天智障的舟舟，当他沉浸在无穷魅力的音乐海洋中时，俨然成了一切生命的主宰。实告诉我们，人生在世缺憾不可避免。用一颗坚韧之心勇敢地正视缺憾。也许就能创造出令人意想不到的非凡的完美来。
走出缺憾需要豪气。真正的英雄才能见到后天的太阳，我们不能像西楚霸王一样遇到一次战事失败，生命的挑战，就上演了一出霸王别姬、乌江自的悲剧，痛失东山再起的机会。也许，走过明天会有雾霾的消散、壮丽的美景、天赐的转机出现，可他没有等到“后天”便放弃了。曾经“破釜沉舟，百二雄关终属楚”的壮志豪情，去哪里了?他没有用缺憾演绎完美，缺少能屈能伸的忍耐，假若他能勇敢地直面血淋淋的现实，走出失败的阴影，或许历史将被改写。
弥补缺憾需要智慧。一个没有志气的人，是不可能弥补缺陷的，一个没有智慧的人是无法弥补缺憾的。身有缺憾，美中不足，痛下决心，改变现状，给自己一种完美无瑕的纯洁，这是任何优缺点和毛病的人都想要的，关键是如何消除缺点，运用智慧，弥补不足，成就伟大。没有双臂的残疾青年刘伟，用他惊天的毅力，超强的智慧，用双脚弹出人生最精彩的华章，演绎着青春不败的神话，出了坚持不懈、不屈不挠志气，还有他选择的智慧，成为伟大音乐家的梦想。
如果你是一株幼苗，请不要为自己的稚嫩而自卑，只要坚韧不拔，终将成为参天大树;如果你是一条小溪，请不要为自己的渺小而神伤，只要锲而不舍，终将成就拥抱大海的梦想;如果你身有缺憾，请不要自暴自弃，就做一个真的猛士，扬长避短，拥有美丽的人生吧!
【修改并点评】
1.题目“用缺憾演绎完美”揭示材料中心，拟题角度精准，体现了哲理和思辨性。
2.开篇开门见山，语言简练，运用材料，引出论点;中间部分，围绕中心，运用四个小论点，层层深入地展开论述，论据还正反对比，论述过程具有思辨性;结尾排比句照应开头，升华中心。
做自己的避风港
阅读下面的材料，按照要求写一篇不少于8000字的文章(60分)船在槽式航道中行驶时，船首的岸推力与船尾的岸吸力，形成了转船力矩，使船首向航道中心侧偏转，船尾则向岸边偏转。船舶整体将被压向岸壁的翻转，由于船首船尾受力不同，最容易造成侧翻的现象，称为岸壁效应。对于上述两句话，你有什么看法?请根据阅读后的感悟和联想，写一篇文章。要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题，不要脱离材料内容及含义范围作文，不要套作，不要抄袭。做自己的避风港
人们总是认为离岸最近的地方船行驶是最安全的，可是事却恰恰相反。船在槽式航道中行驶时，当船头与岸靠近并且平行行驶时，船头产生了岸推力，将船头向外推去;船尾则产生了岸吸力，将船尾向岸边吸去，一条船由于船首船尾的受力不同，最容易造成侧翻。岸壁效应告诉我们:一个人要想取得成功，就必须摆脱岸壁的吸引，不要依赖那些看似风平浪静的岸边，独立自主，自己做自己的避风港。正如小仲马所说的:“要是靠我的父亲大仲马而成名，我宁愿默默无闻。” 在生活上取得独立，必须靠自身的力量。也许，你每天早上起来都闻到早餐的香味，每天放学后都有父母接你放学，但是请你记住，温室里的花朵因经不起狂风暴雨的侵袭，而不能健康成长。要成长，必须自己积蓄力量。因此，你可以尝试着看自己搭乘公共汽车，坐地铁回家;你可以尝试着自己洗衣服，叠衣服;寒暑假里，你可以尝试着打零工，养活自己，自己交足学费。经过这些历练后，我相信，你的生存能力会大大提高。你这株幼苗在经历了生活的风雨洗礼后，会变得更加强壮。所以，劳累时，自己做自己的避风港，小憩栖息在自己营造的精神庄园，即使暴风雨来临，你也不会因为四处寻找依靠，而百感交集。
在事业上取得成就，必须自己乘风破浪。苏轼经历了“冯唐易老，李广难封”的困境之后，终于明白，要靠自己的力量，不能空等他人的赏识。于是，他立下了“会挽雕弓如满月，西北望，射天狼”的宏伟志向，并为之不懈努力，在官任上，为民出力，做了好多造福百姓的好事，最好的自己，从而立下口碑。新东方创始人俞敏洪北大毕业后，依靠自己的力量，夫妻二人艰难地从小作坊干起，不断地吸纳有识之士的加盟，最后创建了庞大的新东方帝国，成为人们仰慕的自主创业的成功人士。事实证明一个真理:依靠自己，才能变得真正强大。在社会人类发展中，依靠他人力量必亡。回顾历史，我们不难发现，曾经创造了古代灿烂文明的古希腊，为何早早地变成了一片废墟?究其原因，它在社会的发展中，依靠外来奴隶的力量，而古希腊人自己则坐享其成，受用成果，不思进取，饱食终日，无所用心，最终被马其顿王国消灭。事实告诉我们一个道理:一个民族，一个国家承载着无数人的生命与希望，只有足够的坚强，依靠自己的力量，才能在世界民族之林有一席之地。因此，风浪中，只有做自己的避风港，才能实现“长风破浪会有时，直挂云峰济沧海”的目标。亲爱的朋友，学会独立自主地生活和学习吧，我们前方的路还很漫长，我们的责任还很重大，只有依靠自己的力量，才能让自己强壮起来，立足于社会，做主宰自己命运的神!正如毛泽东告诉我们的那样:“自信人生二百年，会当水击三千里。” 【修改与点评】
1.题目“做自己的避风港”运用比喻的修辞命题，形象生动，容易使人产生联想。2.在论述过程中，善于运用正反对比的论证方式论证。列举事例，有个人的，有国家民族的，有现实的自己，有古代的本国和外国的他族，有当代人所共知的典型代表，有当下我们的中学生，结合实际，从身边小事说起，更有说服力和可信度，避免了空喊口号式的空洞无物的号召。
3，结尾文章的照应开头，强调独立自主地生活学习。之所以强调这些，是因为我们的路很长，我们的责任还很重，这样说来，读罢文章作者的责任感，时代的使命感油然而生。
第四篇：材料作文预测
材料作文预测
真题一：读下面的材料，自拟题作文，600字左右。
曾经有一个悲观的青年欲了结一生，在海边徘徊，长吁短叹。有一老者注意到了，便上前询问。“你为什么不开心呢，年轻人？”“我现在一无所有，一无所长，不断失败，我再也没有什么指望了，不如一死了之。”“你其实很富有，年轻人。”“是吗？”年轻人一脸狐疑。“给你十万元，买你一只眼睛好吗？”“那可不行？”年轻人想都没想。“八万元，买一只胳膊？”“不行。”“那就买一只手，或三个手指头？”“也不行。”老者哈哈大笑：“年轻人，你现在知道你多么富有吧。”
真题二：读下面的一首小诗《苔》，自定立意，自己拟题，写一篇600字左右的文章。
苔 清
袁枚
白日不到处，青春恰自来。苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。
真题三：
会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。
――杜甫 登山始觉天高广，到海方知浪渺茫。
――王溥 路漫漫而其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。
——屈原 雄关漫道真如铁，而今迈步从头越。
——毛泽东
读上面的诗句，自选角度，自己命题，写一篇600字左右的文章。真题四：读下面的材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇600字左右的文章。
凶猛的非洲犀牛竟有鸟类朋友，就是犀牛鸟。
一头犀牛足有好几吨重，它皮肤坚厚，如同披着一身刀枪不入的铠甲，头部那碗口般大的一支长角，任何猛兽被它一顶都要完蛋。据说犀牛发起性子的时候，别说是狮子，就连大象也要避让三分。这样的家伙，怎么和体形像画眉般大小的犀牛鸟成了“知心朋友”呢？ 原来，犀牛的皮肤虽然坚厚，可是皮肤皱褶之间却又嫩又薄，一些体外寄生虫和吸血虫的蚊虫便趁虚而入，从这里把它们的口器刺进去，吸食犀牛的血液。犀牛又痒又痛，可除了往自己身上涂泥能多少防御一点这些昆虫的叮咬外，再没有别的好办法来赶走、消灭这些讨厌的害虫。而犀牛鸟正是捕虫的好手，它们成群地落在犀牛背上，不断地啄食着那些企图吸犀牛血的害虫，自己获得了饱餐，犀牛也浑身舒服，自然很欢迎这些会飞的小伙伴来帮忙。
除了帮助犀牛驱虫外，犀牛鸟对犀牛还有一种特殊贡献。犀牛虽然嗅觉和听觉很灵，可视觉非常不好。若是有敌人逆风悄悄来袭，它就很难察觉到。这时候，它忠实的朋友犀牛鸟就会飞上飞下，叫个不停，犀牛就会意识到危险来临，及时采取防范措施。
第五篇：2015作文预测
1.阅读下面材料，按照要求写一篇不少于800字的文章
社会主义核心价值观中，这样诠释“敬业”：敬业是对公民执业行为准则的价值平方价，要求公民忠于职守，克己奉公，服务人民，服务社会，充分体现社会主义职业精神。
请选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭，不少于800字。
2.阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
王国维在清华国学院任教时，要求他的学生要做到“六不”，即不放言高论、不攻击古人、不议论他人短长、不吹嘘、不夸渊博、不抄袭他人言论。王国维的这“六不”在今天看来，依然有很强的现实意义。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭，3.阅读下面文字，从材料内含的丰富意蕴中选择一个角度作文。题目自拟，文体自选，字数不少于800字。
11月16日晚在深圳罗湖区，发生了一件事：27岁男于李某在一家面馆检到了一个钱包，里面有2200元现金、身份证和几张银行卡，他本打算去交给民警，可在南湖派出所附近徘徊良久之后，他产生了借“天上掉下来的钱包”让自己“出名”的想法，连夜做了一面表扬自己的锦旗。次日，李某带着锦旗“挨家挨户”找媒体求曝光。一番折腾后，李某按照钱包内身份证上的地址，“终于”找到了整夜焦虑不安的失主，并收了失主200元的红包及一个苹果。
4.阅读下面文字，从材料内含的丰富意蕴中选择一个角度作文。题目自拟，文体自选，字数不少于800字。
曼德拉：“如果天空是黑暗的，那就摸黑生存;如果发出声音是危险的，那就保持沉默;如果自觉无力发光的，那就蜷伏于墙角。但不要习惯了黑暗就为黑暗辩护;不要为自己的苟且而得意;不要嘲讽那些比自己更勇敢热情的人们。我们可以卑微如尘土，不可扭曲如蛆虫。”
5.阅读下面的文字，按要求作文。
成功往往是最好一刻来访的客人。也有人说，要把每一分钟都当成生命中的最后的一刻。生命中从不乏至真、至善、至美的一刻，我们常要留一刻给自己，去微笑，思考，欣赏„„
请以“留一刻给自己”为题写一篇作文，文体不限，不少于800字。6.最后一公里
《尚书·旅獒》：“为山九仞，功亏一篑。”《论语·子罕》：子曰：“譬如为山，未成一篑，止，吾止也!譬如平地，虽覆一篑，进，吾往也!”两位圣人不约而同地告诫我们，做事要善始善终，不能半途而废，在功败垂成之际，只要我们坚持走完最后一公里，就能得到完满的结果。7.阅读下面的文字，根据要求作文。
我们都读过秦观的《鹊桥仙》，“金风玉露一相逢，便胜却人间无数”“两情若是久长时，又岂在朝朝暮暮”。这些词句总是能引出我们许多的感慨：什么是“短暂”，什么是“永恒”?„„而这些感慨恐怕也不仅仅是关于爱情的。
请以“短暂与永恒”为话题写—篇文章。
[注意] ①所写出内容必须在话题的范围之内。②立意自定。文体自选。④题目自拟。⑤不少于800字。⑥不得抄袭。
8.阅读下面明代《笑林》中的一则笑话，写一篇不少于800字的文章;角度自选;立意自定;题目自拟;除诗歌外，文体自选。
车胤囊萤读书，孙康映雪读书。一日，康往拜胤，不遇，问何往，门者曰：“出外捉萤火虫去了。”已而胤答拜康，见康闲立庭中，问：“何不读书?康曰：我看今日这天不像个下雪的。”
9.中央电视台打造的据说是国内首部真人秀纪录片《客从何处来》，通过易中天，马未都，曾宝仪、陈冲、阿丘等五位名人的“寻根问祖”，“讲述老百姓自己的故事”，备受关注。片中陈冲有句名言：“你是雄?你爱的人是谁，你就是谁;你是什么?你影响了别人什么，你就是什么。”
其实，人来天地间说到底都是“过客”，哪怕你闻达八方，富可敌国，也不可能成为这个里球的永久居民。不过，你既然来了一趟，就不能仅仅是“做客”，综合上述材料，你有什么所思所感?写一篇不少于800字的文章。
10.阅读下面的材料，根据要求作文。(70分)
天下的江河很少有直直的，大多是拐来拐去的。为什么?水要跟大地妥协。当然，最后水还是往东流了,那是挡不住的。
上面的材料，引发了你怎样的联想或感悟?请就此写一篇不少于800字的议论文或记叙文。
要求：(1)必须符合文体要求;(2)角度自选，立意自定，标题自拟;(3)不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围;(4)不得抄袭，不得套作。
11.阅读下面材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
郎咸平说：“一个没有危机感的民族是一个没有希望的民族。有危机并不可怕，可怕的是我们对危机视而不见，粉饰太平;更可怕的是当危机来临的时候，我们采取‘头疼医头脚疼医脚’的办法，制造更大的危机。”
审视当下，生态危机、环境危机、经济危机、道德危机、文化危机、信仰危机等等，正像宣在人们头上的达摩克利斯之剑!有人对此感到悲观，也有人认为“危机就是转机”。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。
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